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©2008-2009 ~brucebah
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Sorry I haven't posted any new deviations for a looong while. But anyway here's another one for you guys to critique and comment on. I'd really appreciate some advanced crit's...

Peace,

-bruce

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advanced critique?
really nice imagery and use of type on the first page. Second page, I like the title, but the rest isn't legible enough, it looks good as an artwork but not so much as a form to fill in. the larger texts are alright but the smaller ones can be replaced with a typeface that's close to this one but is used more for body text rather than display.

Otherwise, awesome job!

Hope that helps :)

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hey bro. yeah that really helps, and thanks for the critique too:) i agree with you about the second page, it looks impressive and legible as an artwork but not so much as a form to fill in, it looked great in printed form though, but yeah..you're right about that one. =)

Thanks!:D

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I love your colours and positioning and the text is beautifully arranged. I think the downside to this explosion of creativity on a rego form is that it can be kinda ineligible in spots.

Still I doubt anyone would complain it just means you need to concentrate.

Sick, B.
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thanks bro!:)

love.

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yeh, well there's that too, screen doesn't show things the way they print out, so it might still be good as a print :)

No Problem :)

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I can't wait for Camp 09!

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:D me too!...so what did you think of this one bro?

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I'm assuming great because of your comment haha:)

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yeh it caught my eye for sure. I would probably develop the layout a little more... but aesthetically I think you have developed or well developing that eye for design. keep studying other designs and how layouts are done.

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